My attempt at … A QUATERN
Definition …
A Quatern is a sixteen line French form composed of four quatrains. It is similar to the Kyrielle and the Retourne. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of stanza one is the second line of stanza two, third line of stanza three, and fourth line of stanza four. A quatern has eight syllables per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme scheme.

”Ocean Waves’ … Pen & Wash – WHB . May 2017
‘In Resignation’
I wish the tide to swallow me whole
As though a thief had from me stole
My life, but then in guilt forgone
His gains, paused, and then moved on.
I’ve had enough of body and soul
I wish the tide to swallow me whole
For now I see, I realise,
Life is too short to compromise.
Decisions hurt but must be made,
And so, before my debts are paid
I wish the tide to swallow me whole;
I’m ready now, I’ve lost control.
No longer can I bear the pain,
Resigned to never feel again,
Towards the waves I edge my stroll
I wish the tide to swallow me whole.
‘The Seashore’ … Pen & Wash – Photoshopped with edge effect … WHB – April 2017
An excellent Quatern Roland. The rhythm you have captured in your poem gives a feeling of the tide ebbing and flowing. Good paintings.
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Thank you. I appreciate you commenting, Davy.
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More lovely words and beautiful pictures – thank you!
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… And thank you, Cate.
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