
‘Heartbeats’ … WHB – Pen & Wash: April 2017
HEARTBEATS
You stole a share of my heartbeats
That first time we walked on the hills.
I had thought that love would not happen,
I was done with excitement and thrills.
But you made me aware of my heartbeats,
Which I hardly had noticed before;
You brought to me new hope and passion,
A rebirth I could not ignore
So I now take heed of my heartbeats,
They race whenever you’re near,
They are a true measure of closeness,
They yearn for you till you appear.
Then in the fullness of time,
When my heart has run its full course,
I’ll know I’ve left you a portion of me,
My heartbeats’ still warm vital force.
I loved the measure of your heartbeats. such a pure sound. lovely poem.
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Thank you, Singledust. I am grateful for your comment.
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my pleasure. I am seldom touched by tenderness. when I do read it. it gives me lots of peace and hope
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My thanks. It pleases me to have your comments.
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This is a wonderfully touching poem! I love how it has just the right measure of whimsy to suggest the light-heartedness of early romantic love without at all overdoing it. Excellent illustration, too! Thank you for sharing this!
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I appreciate you taking the time to comment, Paul. Thank you.
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It’s been annoying me all day that “whimsy” wasn’t quite the word I wanted. But the better word won’t come to mind. How frustrating! You ever have one of those days, Roland?
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I find most days like that at some point, Paul. Early mornings work best for me. I seem to fade as the day progresses.
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And in a heartbeat
Roland’s Ragbag paints pictures
Of undying love.
Thank you for some lovely thoughts and images to take into the weekend Roland. Have a good one.
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Many thanks for your comment, Davy. Have a pleasant weekend yourself too.
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Thanks Roland.
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Thank you for the impromptu verse (haiku or not!) Davy. Have a good weekend yourself.
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This touched my heart, Roland!
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Thank you, Vidur.
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Lovely and quite touching, Roland.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it, Eugenia.
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