2 Katauta = 1 Sedoka
The Katauta is an unrhymed Japanese form consisting of 17 or 19 syllables. The poem is a three-lined poem with syllable counts of: 5/7/5 or 5/7/7. . . . A single katauta is considered incomplete, or a half-poem . . . a pair of katautas using the syllable count of 5,7,7 is called a sedoka.
The Sedoka, therefore, can be defined as – an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the syllable count of: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives.
Source – adapted from: Shadow Poetry
Continuing my occasional efforts at attempting different poetic forms I offer two Sedokas of my own composition, both based on the advent of a new year, with prospects for new beginnings . . .
In ancient Roman religion and myth, Janus is the god of beginnings, gates, transitions, time, duality, doorways, passages, and endings. He is usually depicted as having two faces, since he looks to the future and to the past. (Wikipedia)
JANUS 2018 – Two Sedoka
Yesterday has gone
Turn your face to the future
Let hope reign over regret
The future holds sway
Promises there are to keep
Let Love conquer dark despair
Look to the future
The past is history now
But remember its lessons
For they tell the truth
That what tomorrow will bring
Is what yesterday forgot
A thoughtful and positive start to 2018 Roland and I hope it brings you all you hope for. I have never come across these forms before and look forward to trying them.
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Thanks for your welcome to 2018, Davy. Yes, sedoka, new to me too. Not of course to be confused with Neil Sedaka – now there’s a blast-from-the-past!
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Or Sedoku Roland that thing with numbers. I do like a bit of Neil Sedaka.
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The perfect start to 2018, now I’m no expert but from the brief I’d say you nailed it Sir !
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A welcome comment, Nigel. Thank you. I’m looking forward to our continuing exchanges in 2018.
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Roland, thank you for this wonderful post this morning. Both intellectually and emotionally you lift me up. First the superb drawing of the God Janos, an absolute delight. You are gifted.
The two Sedokas are filled with truth and strength and st the same time optimism drives them forward.
I particularly love the second with its positive outlook.
May we go forward in the new year with confidence and yet remembering the lessons we learnt. Yes, how I agree and needed these words you give.
May your year reflect these words
Miriam
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Your generous response gratifies my ego and threatens to carry me through another, hopefully productive, year. I thank you Miriam, and wish you a fulfilling 2018.
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Very nicely done, Roland
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Thank you, Derrick. From this two-faced Janus (well, it is my birthday month).
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Thank you for a wonderful start to the new year, Roland. Nicely done and thank you for sharing.
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… And thank you for your comment, Eugenia.
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