[ # 77of My Favourite Short Poems ]

A pastiche, created in PRISMA, of a painting of my own of Aberaeron, Ceredigion, West Wales.
A pastiche is a creation of visual art, poetry, literature, theatre, or music that imitates the style or character of the original work. A pastiche poem imitates the form, style, and often the subject matter, of an original poem. A parody also does this, but, unlike a parody, a pastiche is not written to mock or satirize the original poem, but it is written in a spirit of respect for the original.
I have used such a poem before when I included, in one of my blogs, Brian Patten’s poem ‘Mary had a bit of Lamb’. It is a pastiche version of the nursery rhyme composed by the American writer, Sarah Josepha Buell Hale (1788 – 1879), which Patten first published in his book, ‘Thawing Frozen Frogs’. See my earlier blog: Mary’s Lamb
Perhaps my favourite poem in this style is Spike Milligan’s:
I must go down to the sea again,
to the lonely sea and the sky;
I left my shoes and socks there –
I wonder if they’re dry?
Yes, that is just what a pastiche poem is. Often short and commencing with the traditional opening of the original, usually well-known verses, which it is intended to imitate, but with altered context, frequently with humorous intention. Of course, there is a fine line to be drawn between pastiche, which can border on parody, or even bowdlerisation (See definition).
I recently came across, on my surfing travels, the following brief (two-line) examples which are the work of a Harvard academic, Francis DiMenno (1979). Here is a selection from his longer poem he calls: ‘MY FUZZY VALENTINE’ . . .
‘The Passionate Shepherd to His Love’, By Christopher Marlowe
Come live with me and be my love,
I’ll even come and help you move.
‘Upon Julia’s Clothes’, by Robert Herrick
Whenas in silks my Julia goes,
I hope she owns some less expensive clothes
‘On the Tombs in Westminster Abbey’, by Francis Beaumont
Mortality behold, and fear,
We’re almost out of bottled beer.
‘Since there’s no help, come let us kiss and part’, by Michael Drayton
Since there’s no help, come let us kiss and part
There’s never been an argument you wouldn’t start.
‘Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard’, by Thomas Gray
The curfew tolls the knell of parting day,
And now it’s time to squander all my pay.
‘Spring, the sweet spring’, by Thomas Nashe
Spring, the sweet Spring, is the year’s pleasant king,
And Sammy, Frank, and Dean go Ring-a-Ding-Ding.
Over this coming week I will present a selection of my own attempts at this style, hoping that in doing so I offend no one, including the artistic sensibilities of those poets, living or dead, whose memorable opening lines have suggested these alternatives to me.
Great post Roland, informative and fun, I look forward to more, it’s going to be a great week .
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I hope your expectations will be rewarded. Thank you for commenting, Nigel.
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Roland, may I first say I am totally taken by the shining lights in your painting. It is seriously good.
As to Pastiche, it sounds like a lovely French drink or cake. Kidding apart, you have used up my morning brain power and I have studied the forms, I do see how close one can skate to parody but I am sure you will avoid the trap. Pastiche is seeing the humour if I get you right.
Look forward to your poems.
miriam
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Thank you, Miriam…. then have a go yourself.
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That is a thought. It means I will have to study a bit more not to fall into the chasm.😉
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. . . but the chasm might be worth exploring! Good luck.
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What a wonderful collection, Roland. I look forward to your contributions
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. . . I trust they will be worth your effort, Derrick.
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A humorous and fun post to get the week underway Roland and looking forward to your poetry in this style through the week. Great piece of art as well.
I wandered lonely as a cloud,
That floats on high o’er vales and hills
When all at once I was hit by a thought
My shoes were at home on the window sill.
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Thanks, Davy. Sounds like my Cumbrian Bard is getting forgetful. Can’t wander far from Dove Cottage looking for daffodils in your bare feet.
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Very true Roland. Flip flops at least.
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Fun post and I look forward to your contributions. Your painting is stunning and seems to portray a charming village on the water.
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Thanks for commenting, Eugenia. My original painting can be seen on one of mu previous blogs –
at: https://rolandsragbag.wordpress.com/2016/11/11/aberaeron/ . You will notice that my use of the Prisma app on it produces something quite different from the organal – an improvement I imagine!
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The painting is beautiful either way. But, your Prisma app certainly gives it a different look and yes, I like it better than the original.
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