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Thoughts
Ideas
Flicker-flow my mind
Suggestions
Ideas
Broil
Half-baked
Within its febrile cauldron
Magnetic impulses
Stir the mix
Threatening to connect
But rarely touching
Intuition sparks
But does not flame
Promise flat-lined
So many false dawns
So few horizons reached
Dawn’s promise
Resolved in mediocrity
Ahh …Roland, I shall try again and see if this goes past the moderators in the sky.
I worry about this cauldron, it will soon overheat. Just keep writing the magnetic
impulses and intuitions down. A spark will light – as it did in this poem which
had me laughing. ” Resolved in mediocrity” – indeed. I do not agree. 😊.
Miriam
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Thank you, Miriam. I value your appreciative comments.
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Such are the thoughts of the creative mind
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Indeed, thoughts, concerns, deliberations. Thank you, Derrick.
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No mediocrity present here! 🙂
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I am grateful for your generous response, Eugenia.
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My pleasure.
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