
‘The Crypt . . . Pen – WHB 2020
In Memoriam
In the crypt
Which is my mind
Lie the tombs
Of those I’ve known
Entrenched within
Each treasured niche
Embalmed in memory
And swathed in love alone
Wife and parents
Beloved friends
Lost loves and lovers
All met their ends
Before I had
a chance to say
I’ll love you till
My dying day
There they now lie
In peace while I
Guard their memories
With a sigh
And rarely lift
Their coffin lid
Remind myself
Of what they did
Of what they once
Had meant to me
For only the blind
Can truly see
So poignant
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Thanks, Derrick. I must snap out of this mordant phase I seem to be suffering.
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Writing will help
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I’m hoping so.
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This beautiful poem is also a praise to those you loved and who loved you. By keeping all this richness alive you will also find courage to lift your eyes and follow their steps. To give
light and love.
You know as well as me that dark and light goes alongside each other.
miriam
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Thank you, Miriam. The chiaroscuro effect artists call it.
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I am happy to have learnt the full meaning of a new word. Read it up now and
feel I use this effect frequently without knowing.
Famoused painters e.g. Leonardo da Vinci were mentioned.
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Caravaggio also used this technique.
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