“ . . . A Robin Redbreast in a Cage Puts all Heaven in a Rage. A dove house fill’d with doves and pigeons Shudders Hell thro’ all its regions. A Dog starv’d at his Master’s Gate Predicts the ruin of the State. A Horse misus’d upon the Road Calls to Heaven for Human blood. Each outcry of the hunted Hare A fiber from the Brain does tear . . . ”
A Japanese ‘Father William’ … Pen & Ink – WHB – 2014
Are Old, Father William” is a poem by Lewis Carroll that appears in his book ‘Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland’ (1865).
You are Old, Father William
“You are old, Father William,” the young man said, “And your hair has become very white; And yet you incessantly stand on your head – Do you think, at your age, it is right?
“In my youth,” Father William replied to his son, “I feared it might injure the brain; But, now that I’m perfectly sure I have none, Why, I do it again and again.”
“You are old,” said the youth, “as I mentioned before, And have grown most uncommonly fat; Yet you turned a back-somersault in at the door — Pray, what is the reason for that?”
“In my youth,” said the sage, as he shook his grey locks, “I kept all my limbs very supple By the use of this ointment — one shilling a box — Allow me to sell you a couple?”
“You are old,” said the youth, “and your jaws are too weak For anything tougher than suet; Yet you finished the goose, with the bones and the beak — Pray, how did you manage to do it?”
“In my youth,” said his father, “I took to the law, And argued each case with my wife; And the muscular strength, which it gave to my jaw, Has lasted the rest of my life.”
“You are old,” said the youth, “one would hardly suppose That your eye was as steady as ever; Yet you balanced an eel on the end of your nose — What made you so awfully clever?”
“I have answered three questions, and that is enough,” Said his father. “Don’t give yourself airs! Do you think I can listen all day to such stuff? Be off, or I’ll kick you down stairs.”
I wish to put a hold on life, freeze it at this instant; stop my headlong race to reach some intangible resolution before life, and with it death, overtake me.
Yet, a wanton fervour forces me to write; a defining greed pushes me on; a need to achieve, to find the telling phrase to verify my competence.
There is a frenzy on me, a new lust for life alien to my past; but still I draw on that very past to colour the present and steer me into my aspired future.
My imperative is to leave an imprint on the foreshore of my life before its tide recedes. Regardless of renown, I wish to leave a noble fragment of myself with a proven hint of worth to carry me beyond my grave.
Such fragments, the flotsam of my endeavours, washed up and left for those seashore scavengers, those ardent beachcombers of other people’s detritus; my scraps left for Autolycus to pick over. I need the harvest of my life to be another’s prized perception, their acquired inspiration.
And yet I know I must desist, I must allow those morsels, slivers of myself already extant, to speak for themselves, to represent me to the future.
I must accept that already I have utilised my credit with the past and created my memorial for the future.
“These fragments I must shore against my ruin.”
The quotation appearing at the beginning and end of my poem is, slightly adapted, taken from T.S.Eliot’s poem “The Wasteland”.
Delilah, of course, took away Samson’s Life Force, his strength, by cutting off his hair whilst asleep.
My photograph was taken from a beach in Cornwall, U.K., in 2006. I do trust things turned out better in reality than in my rather jaundiced, wholly imagined, speculations on the subject of marriage and the impulsive gestures which do often bring it about – as demonstrated in some of the ostentatious proposals which took place at the Rio Olympics. (WHB)
‘MARRY ME’ it said in the sky, The brazenly shouted plea; Showcasing a lover’s great passion? A proposal she had to agree.
Was love in there somewhere I wondered? Was that what the question implied? A lifelong commitment on offer – Based on whim, or desire for a bride?
“I’d love to” she whispered so gently, Accepting his plea without question. Her doubts were dispelled by his bluster How could she deny his suggestion?
They married in bliss shortly after, A lifetime of rapture to come. With hope for a lifetime of passion? Well, that’s how it’s meant to be done
The first happy years ran so smoothly; The path of love seemed to be fine, But the storm clouds were looming above them Creating a warning fault line.
It was life intervened in their story, A lassitude lay on their marriage, Their ardour and pleasures defeated. Love stalled, reduced to the humdrum,
Both felt as though they’d been cheated. Habit had killed off their lustre; Routine had entered their souls; Self-regard took over from closeness; Possessions their only goals.
So was it for this they were married, Just to reach an acceptance of sorts? All passion long lost from their dowry Now littered with bile and retorts.
The end of this story I’m told? They parted with barely a whisper; What began with a flamboyant gesture, Ended, ‘Not with a bang but a whimper’.
This last line echoing T.S.Eliot’s oft-quoted lines from ‘The Hollow Men’ . . .
‘This is the way the world ends This is the way the world ends This is the way the world ends Not with a bang but a whimper.’
Between the idea And the reality Between the motion And the act Falls the Shadow.
T.S. Eliot (The Journey of the Magi)
I wrote this poem, as I did several of my recently blogged poems, many years ago. In ‘A Death I Die’ below the sober thoughts reflect a dark mood, the reason for which I now have no recollection. For me, at the time of writing, they obviously represented the Shadow, that halfway house between knowing and not-knowing, between what is and what might be, between Eliot’s ‘the motion and the act’.
A DEATH I DIE
I have no heart for selfish love that starts and ends with flesh. It leads along an endless path, it binds, compels afresh.
There is a sort of death I die; Am killed and kill myself. I am alone in this. I am a willing suicide. I go on a journey bearing my own end.
This death is a habit, a nasty selfish habit I know and hate it. I both give and receive. The giving is good – but also a habit.
Receiving – an infinite regression. We plan the means and the end is all. Purgatory is the cemetery, time the resurrection. And All is planned that This should be so.
When the world feels dark bring a Torch Let the Torch be brightly lit Let it illuminate the darkest corners of Earth May Earth play its part and forever spin For a spinning Wheel gathers no more Covid And Covid will be killed by the Needle And through the eye of that very Needle Will Nature work her magic And bring us all a Spring to recall Life renewed in Hope For ‘Hope is the thing with Feathers … Which never stops at all.‘
VERSE – WHB: Dec.2018 . . . [ With acknowledgement to Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) ]
Swing the lead Play it for dead; Keep a lowly profile Life is no featherbed,.
Don’t stick your head, As Joe Soap said, Above the parapet, Lest you have it shot at.
Lie very low Avoid life’s blows And play the game ‘Dead Donkey’.
Avoid the Pricks, The pointed arrows Of outrageous fortune. And be afraid, For life is out to get you. Let that Sea of Fortune Be forever calm.
No good at last, With chances past, To count the cost When all is lost.
Best play your cards Close to your chest; Hide those better feelings. Be self-indulgent, Go with your better judgement. Leave other hearts to their bleeding.
Following on from my previous blog on the subject – 2 days ago – I re-print below the results of continuously pressing the LEFT-SIDE Predicted Text suggestions from my SwiftKey keyboard (the line-breaks are my own!) . . .
… is the kiss of the sea reaches the moon in the sun won’t be the one to end my life has come to the brink and I have no idea how much of it will help me In telling verse Ideas diverse Intersperse my thoughts Broaching and the fact I have had to blink to be with you for commenting and I hope you like the rest of your email with your comments and suggestions on how we can improve the 3-level 4 of 3rd party needs to get the best out of fashion shop and the best way for us in order for us from discarded litter of our boys in the morning and the Heather clad on Sunday morning as they will not let me know when 3rd is best to be there for 2pm or just the same for the rest… et al
A somewhat different result was produced when I tried sequential predicting of text from the right-hand side of my Swiftkey keyboard. ( the symbols, on my keyboard, but unfortunately not reproduced here in WordPress, were in fact all brightly coloured emoticons) . . . SEE BELOW
Predictive text 3 (Right-side Word)
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. . . Why Not . . . Give Predictive Text a try on your mobile/tablet/computer? You might produce a fictional masterpiece!